Game is just starting, so I can’t give it more than 4*, but I enjoyed what’s there so far. I don’t agree with the xenophobia of the MC, but I get it. And as a narrative device, even an overdone one perhaps, it gives him a character flaw to grow through. Based on what he’s seen, demons are absolutely monsters to him. Even the way Red (nickname for the yet-unnamed demon girl you meet) talks, she’s got a clearly not-human way of thinking and speaking that Vee does really well to convey in a manner that keeps her cute and likeable for the reader, but still makes her sound very much “other”. Looking forward to more in the future.
The game is really good so far, but story about world isn't clear yet and whole view is a little bit rushed, but just keep going hopefully in this game will be more girls of different races to make a big harem, you know people have lots of fetishes🗿
I feel deceived, I pushed through the insufferable ahole of a main character for the lamia and there's no snek girl yet
I hate racism being a main plot point, especially fantasy racism, I'm so tired of it (like for real is there one fantasy that doesn't have extreme racism as a plot point, it's either humans hate everything not human, elves hate everything not elf, everyone hates humans, or in the case of this "demons are evil") and that being 90% of the mc's personality really sucked any chance of me enjoying this out but I wanted to see how it was once the cute lamia girl got introduced so pushed through and eventually started just skipping his interactions with the demon girl before long and well...
some genuine criticism tho, [spoiler alert] the mc's interactions with the demon girl make no sense, it starts of with the intro bringing up his seething hatred for demons and that they all need to die, his first reaction upon seeing her is to tell is family to leave and he will kill it, then as soon as he has the opportunity to do so he doesn't kill her (obviously she can't die if you want him to fuck her or even become a love interest but everything he has thought so far is basically "kill all demons") then when he decides to let her live he's immediately joking around with her despite still seeing her as an "it" and seriously considering killing her just to be safe, even tho he has no real motivation to keep her alive (he doesn't believe she's responsible for what happened anymore therefore not knowing where they are and he doesn't see her as capable of helping him find them, as well as still seeing her as a potential threat).
basically mc is an insufferable bigoted asshole not only to my displeasure but in complete disregard for how you want the plot to progress, he's a completely seething demon hating soldier until you want him to spare the one demon that is actually shown to us, then he's just flinging insults and joking around with the thing he hates most in the world
also side note on mc's first seeing the demon girl, the story seems to imply he has ptsd about what the demons have done during the war and yet upon seeing something that is very likely a recurring nightmare, a demon in the middle of town right next to his family, he doesn't react as extremely as his opinions and mental state are portrayed in my opinion, he just goes very protective, where with how much trauma and hatred he is portrayed to have I'd expect him to genuinely try to kill her so she doesn't get any chance to do all the horrible things he's 100% convinced she will definitely do, ofcourse his reaction makes sense for a generic bigoted soldier seeing an "enemy" in his town but not for one that seems to be as traumatised as him, heck if he started beating her after he'd first seen her and had the guards pull him off her just to see her in tears, and see his wife and kids be horrified by what he did, then the way he ended up treating her makes some sense still not trusting and still hateful but a tinge of guilt to make him not do anything worse than he already had (not that I want to see that just some things that don't add up to me)
As much as I like reading peoples feelings bout games I'm considering trying out, this wall of text just put me off. I didn't even read it. Try to be more concise in the future if you want people to read what you write.
Sure, I think I get your point-the story up until now is a bit rushed and it makes MC look like an arse.
HowEVER, I put my absolute trust in Vee to better the game as it progresses. Charikiss is phenomenal, and I don't see why PerToLove shouldn't be the same.
they're completely different genres, and this one seems to want to take itself alot more seriously (sometimes... it starts off and at points seems to but at other times seems to want to go the full comedy route and I'm pretty sure that's the main cause of my issues, it seems like it wants to be darker and more serious while still being just as light hearted and goofy as charikiss which just doesn't work), charikiss doesn't have a single male character so their ability to write male characters is an unknown, also the current latest version of charikiss has a very strange plot twist that I'm very unsure of.
so sure charikiss is great, but doesn't really prove anything for a completely different story, with vastly different themes
Looks very promising so far, writing has definitely improved and there are many things to notice or think about, trying to catch the setups and clues on characters. Overall the quality difference is greatly noticeable (renders, storytelling, narrative, designs, music choices), though this game is very different from charikiss, even disregarding hex and gex. Definitely looking forward to more updates
Glad to be here at the very start of your project, the preview of the lamia girl on Discord piqued my interest, and now the story premise itself seems intriguing. Looking forward to seeing what you develop it into from here on out.
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Man, I am literally tossing in bed every night thinking of Charikiss and PerToLove.
Like I seriously want to fast-forward time to see more of them.
Shit, I'd sell my soul to see the full games right the [fluff] now.
Does this game have Chinese? I didn't see the Ilanguage in more books.
Game is just starting, so I can’t give it more than 4*, but I enjoyed what’s there so far. I don’t agree with the xenophobia of the MC, but I get it. And as a narrative device, even an overdone one perhaps, it gives him a character flaw to grow through. Based on what he’s seen, demons are absolutely monsters to him. Even the way Red (nickname for the yet-unnamed demon girl you meet) talks, she’s got a clearly not-human way of thinking and speaking that Vee does really well to convey in a manner that keeps her cute and likeable for the reader, but still makes her sound very much “other”. Looking forward to more in the future.
The game is really good so far, but story about world isn't clear yet and whole view is a little bit rushed, but just keep going hopefully in this game will be more girls of different races to make a big harem, you know people have lots of fetishes🗿
I feel deceived, I pushed through the insufferable ahole of a main character for the lamia and there's no snek girl yet
I hate racism being a main plot point, especially fantasy racism, I'm so tired of it (like for real is there one fantasy that doesn't have extreme racism as a plot point, it's either humans hate everything not human, elves hate everything not elf, everyone hates humans, or in the case of this "demons are evil") and that being 90% of the mc's personality really sucked any chance of me enjoying this out but I wanted to see how it was once the cute lamia girl got introduced so pushed through and eventually started just skipping his interactions with the demon girl before long and well...
some genuine criticism tho, [spoiler alert] the mc's interactions with the demon girl make no sense, it starts of with the intro bringing up his seething hatred for demons and that they all need to die, his first reaction upon seeing her is to tell is family to leave and he will kill it, then as soon as he has the opportunity to do so he doesn't kill her (obviously she can't die if you want him to fuck her or even become a love interest but everything he has thought so far is basically "kill all demons") then when he decides to let her live he's immediately joking around with her despite still seeing her as an "it" and seriously considering killing her just to be safe, even tho he has no real motivation to keep her alive (he doesn't believe she's responsible for what happened anymore therefore not knowing where they are and he doesn't see her as capable of helping him find them, as well as still seeing her as a potential threat).
basically mc is an insufferable bigoted asshole not only to my displeasure but in complete disregard for how you want the plot to progress, he's a completely seething demon hating soldier until you want him to spare the one demon that is actually shown to us, then he's just flinging insults and joking around with the thing he hates most in the world
also side note on mc's first seeing the demon girl, the story seems to imply he has ptsd about what the demons have done during the war and yet upon seeing something that is very likely a recurring nightmare, a demon in the middle of town right next to his family, he doesn't react as extremely as his opinions and mental state are portrayed in my opinion, he just goes very protective, where with how much trauma and hatred he is portrayed to have I'd expect him to genuinely try to kill her so she doesn't get any chance to do all the horrible things he's 100% convinced she will definitely do, ofcourse his reaction makes sense for a generic bigoted soldier seeing an "enemy" in his town but not for one that seems to be as traumatised as him, heck if he started beating her after he'd first seen her and had the guards pull him off her just to see her in tears, and see his wife and kids be horrified by what he did, then the way he ended up treating her makes some sense still not trusting and still hateful but a tinge of guilt to make him not do anything worse than he already had (not that I want to see that just some things that don't add up to me)
As much as I like reading peoples feelings bout games I'm considering trying out, this wall of text just put me off. I didn't even read it. Try to be more concise in the future if you want people to read what you write.
Just read your long comment.
Sure, I think I get your point-the story up until now is a bit rushed and it makes MC look like an arse.
HowEVER, I put my absolute trust in Vee to better the game as it progresses. Charikiss is phenomenal, and I don't see why PerToLove shouldn't be the same.
they're completely different genres, and this one seems to want to take itself alot more seriously (sometimes... it starts off and at points seems to but at other times seems to want to go the full comedy route and I'm pretty sure that's the main cause of my issues, it seems like it wants to be darker and more serious while still being just as light hearted and goofy as charikiss which just doesn't work), charikiss doesn't have a single male character so their ability to write male characters is an unknown, also the current latest version of charikiss has a very strange plot twist that I'm very unsure of.
so sure charikiss is great, but doesn't really prove anything for a completely different story, with vastly different themes
Any chance of impreg?
Hopefully, but first h- scenes with wife actually linked to it.
So this game is still New?
yup
Its nice to see more games with actual effort put into them again, thanks. I'd keep an eye on this dev, they seem promising!
Will there be dickgirl options?
dude i see you everywhere we get it 😭
good to see another game but this game is not for me i dont play male protagonist but good luck
Same for me, I don't play male mc because I am strictly girl-on-girl... BUT,
Vee's games are so fucking good that I just had to try it. You should too bro
Another day, another Vee banger. Can't wait for more!!
Looks cute! What kind of monster girls can we expect?
Looks very promising so far, writing has definitely improved and there are many things to notice or think about, trying to catch the setups and clues on characters. Overall the quality difference is greatly noticeable (renders, storytelling, narrative, designs, music choices), though this game is very different from charikiss, even disregarding hex and gex. Definitely looking forward to more updates
Hope it will be 100% straight and 0% lesbian shit
same. Very good start, game is interesting
not into straight VNs but veebuggsy's work is pretty good. so if you like that, you should play it
btw, nothing against straights, just dont do that in front of me /j (idrc)
weirdo
bro says this as if straight people don't say the exact same bs
people dont get jokes it seems
Snek. 🐍 Good luck with your new game Vee!
Wish the dev nothing but the best.
ChariKiss is my favourite (biased as I am more into yuri), but this game is also phenomenal.
May I ask what languages are supported
The first version was very promising and had a lot of fun and interesting moments.
A big jump in your rendering and writing skills. Demon girl is SO ADORABLE.
Good luck with the project, and hope we can see more soon.
Glad to be here at the very start of your project, the preview of the lamia girl on Discord piqued my interest, and now the story premise itself seems intriguing. Looking forward to seeing what you develop it into from here on out.